We have been working hard to develop our persuasive writing skills. We have had to convince our teachers of all sorts of things. Over the last two weeks we had to use excellent persuasive language to advertise a holiday to a dream holiday location. We spent the first week writing some fantastic advertising. Our focus was on the language we used, our punctuation and making our holiday sound unbeatable. We then used Adobe Spark Pages to create a wonderful online presentation All completed entries were judged by Jodi and Sam on Friday. The children who did the best job of using persuasive language, excellent punctuation and presented their work attractively received prizes. Check out our entries here. Congratulations to Emily who was our overall winner. Alannah, Jack, Tanner and Lily were second equal. Nethasa, Tayla, Keira, William and Hunter were Highly Commended.
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